Teacher's comment:
Very well written essay , very minor mistakes however there is no title!!!!
You can use "Turkish cuisine" instead of "foods of Turkish kitchen".
PS : If you attach "also" to a free-standing sentence, then you do need to put a comma after it.
e.g.
Jose Saramago writes novel with a distinctive style. Also, his eccentric plots often reveal hope in the midst of despair.
Essay Info: Word Count 284 added
6 years ago viewed 2148 times Points: Coherence: 4/5 Vocabulary: 4/5 Grammer: 4/5 Unity: 4/5 Average Point: 4/5